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THE UNENDING CONVERSATION:
SLR’s Online Channel For All Things Legal Writing

Gut Renovations, Rubrics, and the Reduction of Bias in Standard Edited American English and Legal Writing

By Justin R. Kishbaugh*


The authors of Gut Renovations: Using Critical and Comparative Rhetoric to Remodel How the Law Addresses Privilege and Power argue that both the form and substance of traditional legal analysis work to reinforce systems of racial, gender, and class inequity. As such, they contend that if legal writing professors continue to teach deduction and IRAC as the only “correct” method for legal analysis, they are essentially perpetuating a homogenizing and exclusionary methodology. The authors argue that this methodology authorizes and represents only the voice and logic of elite privilege. In this Article, I present evidence that like deduction and IRAC, the very medium of legal writing itself—Standard Edited American English (SEAE)—is a system that replicates and perpetuates implicit racial, gender, and class biases. Despite that both the legal academy and profession operate almost exclusively in SEAE, the privilege that it and its users are afforded allows it to function as an unnamed but constant standard against which difference is marked as deficiency. Therefore, SEAE exists as a paradox: it acts as the mark of quality for academic and legal writing but is rarely acknowledged except when not present and is even more rarely taught in any deliberate or recursive manner. I contend that professors should design and employ rubrics that make explicit the structure of SEAE and their expectations for it in their students’ writing. Students will then be able to identify and meet those standards for a “well-written” text, and professors will prevent the implicit biases inherent in SEAE and writing assessment from affecting their grading process.

Legal [Pedagogy] Scholarship: Why It Counts

By Melissa L. Kidder*


This Article emphasizes the dual professional roles of legal educators: as experts in their legal disciplines and as educators shaping the next generation. It argues for the recognition and encouragement of Scholarship of Teaching and Learning (“SoTL”) within the legal academy. By participating in scholarly pursuits to enhance teaching effectiveness, legal educators undoubtedly contribute to their professional development using the same scholarly methodologies other law professors use in their promotion and tenure process. This Article asserts that the academy should not only encourage SoTL but should also recognize its importance as a form of scholarship. In doing so, this Article draws on a prior discussion in this Journal about what constitutes legal scholarship. In the prior conversation, two legal writing scholars demonstrated how legal writing scholarship meets three well-established criteria for legal scholarship. This Article demonstrates how SoTL meets established criteria when viewed through a lens that acknowledges educators’ dual roles. Specifically, this Article argues how SoTL can meet the same criteria advanced by these scholars simply by using a “law-connected” terminology for the first criteria. This slight revision also embraces the already diverse nature of legal scholarship and aligns with the recent changes occurring within the legal academy. Ultimately, by advocating for a broader understanding of legal scholarship that includes pedagogical inquiry, this Article aims to promote the inclusion of all scholarly work while highlighting the value of SoTL to the legal academy.

We Can And We Should: The Case For Original Research In Legal Academia

By Marcia M. Ziegler*


As lawyers, we have great power—the things we say in courtrooms and write in publications across the country impact the lives of our clients and society as a whole. But as lawyers, we traditionally have not been active in original research—and that should change. We can and we should integrate our talents into original work with PhDs, as our skills are valuable, our knowledge of liability is helpful, and our writing is clear and detailed. These abilities are as yet nearly untapped in original research, but they can and they should be utilized in new and significant ways.

A New Parlor Is Open: Legal Writing Faculty Must Develop Scholarship On Generative AI And Legal Writing

By Kirsten K. Davis*


Generative artificial intelligence likely represents a paradigm shift in legal communication teaching, learning, and practice. What we know (so far) about generative AI suggests that law school legal writing courses will need to teach generative AI skills to be used as part of a hybrid human-generative AI legal writing process. Accordingly, legal writing faculty will need to understand how generative AI works, its implications for legal writing practices, and how to teach legal writers the knowledge and skills needed to use generative AI ethically and effectively in their work.

As a community of scholars, legal writing faculty should lead the inquiry into the connections between generative AI and legal writing products, processes, and practices. This is an exciting time; there are many unanswered questions to explore about the relationships between human writers and machine writing tools.

Unlike other essays in the Unending Conversation collection, this essay does not join a conversation. Instead, it is a conversation starter; it is meant to “open the parlor door” and encourage legal writing scholars to research at the intersection of generative AI and legal writing. As legal communication experts, legal writing faculty are well-situated to be frequent and expert speakers in this conversation.

This essay explains why generative AI represents the beginning of a paradigm shift in legal writing that requires scholarly exploration and presents some ideas for the “big issues” that will need investigation.

A Tale of Two Disciplines: Legal Writing—A World of Haves and Have-Nots

In his article, A Curmudgeon’s View of the Multi-Generational Teaching of Legal Writing, Professor Jan Levine, bemoans the current state of Legal Writing as an academic discipline. He decries the short memory of its members and organizations and a perceived lack of depth of research in its scholarship. He alleges a tendency of the community to avoid criticism of legal writing colleagues with respect to both pedagogy and scholarship. Further, Professor Levine complains that those writing faculty who achieve tenure no longer have a primary identity as legal writing faculty, something he finds problematic. His overall argument is that generational differences are the root cause of many of these problems and that the younger generations’ ways of approaching matters are necessarily inferior. However, this argument ignores that lower-ranking faculty status and institutional barriers, not generation, are at the heart of these concerns.

Professor Levine and I teach at the same school; he directs the legal writing program and supervised me as the director until just this year, when I stepped away from teaching legal writing due to administrative duties. The fact that I feel comfortable enough to write this response to his well-received article is proof that status matters. An untenured professor, even one with 405(c) status, could not do this with confidence and security. I am conscious that Professor Levine is a major reason legal writing faculty (including me) have tenure and status at Duquesne Kline Law and elsewhere. He deserves many accolades for his previous work, but Curmudgeon’s View misses the mark.

Different generations (and different individuals) bring a variety of strengths to the legal writing field, to both teaching and scholarship, and that diversity is a strength, not a weakness. To the extent Professor Levine’s observations critical of the legal writing field are accurate, it is a function of the lack of status and job security available for the majority of legal writing faculty rather than “naivete,” “incomplete efforts,” or “lack of research.” In this essay I explore several concepts—high turnover, burnout, significant gender disparity, and uneven mentoring of faculty—that contribute to the issues Professor Levine mentions.

The Unending Conversation: Gut Renovations and No-Demo Renos

Elizabeth Berenguer, Lucy A. Jewel and Teri A. McMurtry-Chubbs’ Gut Renovations made an extraordinary contribution to the conversation by showing how traditional legal rhetoric, especially syllogistic reasoning, perpetuates bias and injustice, and proposed looking to non-Western rhetorical forms as an alternative. Essential to the argument is the idea that legal rules and the legal syllogism have great power to determine the outcomes of cases.

We agree that law is biased and that IRAC and rule-based reasoning often furthers that bias. But we argue that doesn’t have to be the case. IRAC and legal rules can be far less constraining and outcome determinative than they first appear. And if IRAC and rules are malleable—not fixed—they can be repurposed as instruments of change.

Sometimes a structural foundation is so faulty that the house must be torn down to the studs. But other times a house can be transformed through no-demo renos by using the structure that exists to create something new and beautiful. This Essay argues that in addition to Gut Renovations’ call to look to other forms of rhetoric to de-bias our perspectives and our law, we also must envision ways to achieve change through the structures of traditional rhetoric. We need to reform traditional legal rhetoric not just from the outside in, but also from the inside out.

Legal [Writing] Scholarship: Why It Counts

This essay continues the controversial conversation about what forms of scholarship count as legal scholarship. At a time when tenure itself is under scrutiny, the question of what scholarship counts toward status improvement or job security in legal academia is as important as ever. In our experience, resistance to legal writing scholarship persists at many law schools. At these schools, the result is that some legal writing faculty must publish in a second area of interest, imposing on them a double burden they might not otherwise assume and depriving them of the opportunity to be students and scholars of the subject they teach. We argue that legal writing scholarship—scholarship that is often inter- or cross-disciplinary in nature, communication-centered, connected to law, and related to the creation of legal texts—meets well-established criteria for legal scholarship and should count towards promotion and all kinds of tenure. As we also demonstrate, legal writing scholarship is both descriptive and normative—the bellwethers of legal scholarship. It is descriptive in the sense that it defines and explores the theory and practice of effective legal communication and normative in the sense that it explores what legal communication can and should be in the form of oral and written advocacy. To understand the legal advocate’s role in achieving just legal outcomes, we need scholarship that is unabashedly descriptive, normative, and interdisciplinary; that restores legal communication to its rhetorical roots, and that aims both for more fair and effective legal solutions and a better understanding of how to achieve them.

Marginalization Matters: Discipline-Building in the Legal Writing Community

Amy Soled’s Unending Conversations essay, The Legal Writing Community’s Bonds Enable It to Flourish, responds to Kevin Bennardo’s controversial essay, Legal Writing’s Harmful Psyche, arguing that Bennardo’s analysis of why legal writing scholarship is not rigorous is flawed and that his proposed solutions are unwarranted. Bennardo’s thesis is that legal writing scholars are “protectionist” and unwilling to engage in rigorous critique of each other’s work, preventing the growth of legal writing as a discipline. Soled’s analysis provides an excellent critique but doesn’t focus on what I see as a key problem with Bennardo’s essay—the failure to address the effect of marginalization on the growth of Legal Writing as a scholarly discipline. In this essay, I address the problem with critiquing the discipline without addressing the marginalization of legal writing scholars within the legal academy. I then provide an alternate critique that begins with an understanding that the cohesiveness of the legal writing community is a strength rather than a weakness but acknowledges that there is room for the discipline to continue growing.

The Critique is on the Glass: The Extension of Museum-Presentation Techniques to Substantively Advance Law School Pedagogy

In 2018, the American Museum of Natural History in New York City visually addressed the inaccuracies in a diorama that purported to depict a meeting between the colonial Dutch and the indigenous Lenape in the seventeenth century. The museum added a layer of commentary to the glass in front of the diorama that identifies and contextualizes the diorama’s inaccuracies and biases. The layer is labeled “Reconsidering this scene,” and ten text boxes point out some of the specific ways the diorama reflects cultural stereotypes at the expense of historical accuracy, including a quote from a contemporary Lenape elder.

Museums are a useful analog to law schools in discussions of how to teach and engage students. And in The Writing’s on the Wall: Using Multimedia Presentation Techniques from the Museum World to Improve Law School Pedagogy, 126 Dick. L. Rev. 475 (2022), Professor Cecilia A. Silver demonstrates how traditional law school teaching would benefit from embracing museum techniques. But museum presentation principles can be more than a corrective to old-fashioned law teaching. The decolonization movement in museums provides a model for teaching students how to critically read cases and learn legal doctrine and how to confront the biases, hierarchies, and injustices of the past and present. In particular, the techniques that museums use to layer, contextualize, and critique information and ideas, including metatextual commentary on their own displays, provide a model for law teaching that empowers law students and challenges the biases and injustices that are endemic to the legal foundations of the law school curriculum.

The Unending Conversation in Legal Writing Scholarship: An Introduction

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Imagine that you enter a parlor. You come late. When you arrive, others have long preceded you, and they are engaged in a heated discussion, a discussion too heated for them to pause and tell you exactly what it is about. In fact, the discussion had already begun long before any of them got there, so that no one present is qualified to retrace for you all the steps that had gone before. You listen for a while, until you decide that you have caught the tenor of the argument; then you put in your oar. Someone answers; you answer him; another comes to your defense; another aligns himself against you, to either the embarrassment or gratification of your opponent, depending upon the quality of your ally’s assistance. However, the discussion is interminable. The hour grows late, you must depart. And you do depart, with the discussion still vigorously in progress.

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